Good pitch
I liked your pitch, it gave me an idea what you were going for, and I probably liked it more because of it.
The bad: There are some odd notes here and there, and sometimes maybe timing issues? I also felt it didn't really stand out, so much as blended in with nostalgia.
The good: It hit that nostalgia hammer but hard. Great job. It has a sense of performance too and didn't feel overly machine like.